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Chapter 11 - We Ride to War


Epilogue - Postremus Regum Britanniae

The world ended last week. Eight days ago. It shifted and crumbled before our eyes and it changed into something unrecognisable.

My name is Jeffrey and I thought that this needed to be written down so that someone knows, someone remembers in the years to come, that the world ended and then, after a week, it started again. Someone needs to record the names and the dates and the places. Morgana suggested it first; she said that it should be me. I’m not sure what she meant by that, but here I am, writing it all down. For posterity or whatever it is that will come next.

I always looked at those plaques on battlefields. ‘Here in some date a battle was fought between the armies of blah and blah’ I never though about what happened to make that plaque, what was written down to be remembered, who watched the people in that battle die and survived to recall how things went.

I never thought that I’d be the person creating that history, but legends need to be recorded or they will never become legends.

It feels insane to be even writing this, but insanity has become normal in the last eight days: yesterday we recovered Excalibur and King Arthur was reborn.

King Arthur, the stuff of legends.

In years to come, people might read this and think that I am exaggerating, using artistic licence to make the story more sensational than it truly was, but I assure you I am not.

Merlin led us to the place where Excalibur was to be found. There were armies of the undead and other creatures, small, large, all sharing the desire to wipe out the human race surrounding it. Creatures I had never seen before, even in books. I was sure as we walked that we were walking to our deaths, but we walked onwards anyway. We had no other choice.

But as we approached, there came the beating of wings, huge wings, a sound that we had grown afraid of in the past days, a sound that meant death. I thought, at first, that it meant death still, until Merlin turned to us, his eyes golden, and assured us that the dragons were there to help us, not harm us. They had, he said, pledged allegiance to Arthur.

With the dragons on our side and Merlin and Morgana, the armies before us were not as menacing. Magic and fire swept aside all of the dead and the beasts were kept away from us.

But when we got inside the building, a tower block of flats, things became more complicated. No longer could the dragons help us, confined as we were, if they were to breathe flame over the building they would kill us as well. So we were forced to fight.

I should list our names here, they should be remembered: the brothers, Gawain and Gareth, Percival, Lance, Gwen, Will, Morgana, Merlin, myself and, of course, Arthur. We were forced to fight in close quarters. We were armed with guns, but our enemies had magic. Fire seemed to dance from their hands, bolts of lightning would attack us or our entire bodies would feel as heavy as lead, and it was then that Merlin stepped forward, holding his hand outstretched.

I had never believed in magic until the day the world ended, but it is impossible to doubt something that you have seen that clearly. He kept away the worst of the spells from us with shields and fought the magic so that we could fight with our hands. Arthur never strayed far from him, though it was unclear who was protecting whom.

Morgana was a swirling mass of power, she seemed to suck the light in and her hair blew in a wind that I could not feel. She took down more of the enemy than I would have believed possible.

The sword was on a floor above us and, with the electricity gone; we had no other choice but to take the stairs. Gawain stayed behind to watch our backs and help to protect our backs. It was the last time I saw him alive.

Morgana stayed with him, to keep magical attacks back, and the rest of us made it up the seven floors towards the place where Excalibur rested. She, somehow, managed to survive.

The battle on the seventh floor was fast and I couldn’t swear to any specifics in the blur of activity, I knew that everyone was fighting.

However, I do remember first laying sight on Excalibur; it lay on a table, blocked from us by people and magic. I have not seen many swords in my life, but this was the best of any I had seen and, from the moment we walked through the door, Arthur was drawn to it.

The call of it was almost audible in the air. Like a hum, I can only imagine how much stronger it must have been for him. It is his sword.

We fought our way towards it and finally Arthur took the sword up and the ground shook. Wind blew about, howling past my ears, and time seemed to slow as Arthur turned and speared a sorceress through the chest, the blade passing through her as easily as it passed through the air. She screamed. A sound so terrible that I thought my ears might explode from it. It seemed to go on and on, worse than fingernails on a blackboard, worse than metal on metal. It reverberated, but Arthur did not flinch.

He was spattered with blood, almost painted red with it, and his face was firm. He looked like he had been born to battle.

As she breathed out her life the undead armies crumpled to the ground, returning to their rest.

She must have been their leader, though we never learnt her name, and at her death, the others fell back, scared for their lives, though I do not believe we have seen the last of them. In the silence of the aftermath, while my ears were still buzzing from the force of that final screech, I saw Arthur turn to Merlin, who looked as exhausted as the rest of us and the King, for none of us doubted that now, said two words that I will never forget, and I will never truly understand.

“I remember.”

-

The world ended eight days ago, and this is the record of what happened on that day and the aftermath. My name is Jeffrey and I swear on my life, and the life of my guitar, that every word I write here is true. This is the tale of the return of King Arthur, the chronicle of the future of the kings of Britain.





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Date: 2010-03-21 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lrndng.livejournal.com
This story was excellent and exciting and read like a tv show ^_^

Date: 2010-03-25 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thanks. I sometimes feel a bit like I'm writing something visual rather than just plain literary. Guess that comes across. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-03-21 08:36 pm (UTC)
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Lovely

Um, is Jeff named for anything, or is he just the bard-figure of this story?

Date: 2010-03-21 10:11 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tetsubinatu.livejournal.com
Not the author - but does Geoffrey of Monmouth ring a bell?

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Date: 2010-03-21 10:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tetsubinatu.livejournal.com
Wow! This was excellent!

I loved that Geoffrey was a guitar player and theology student, BTW.

Sorry not to be more eloquent - I'm a rotten reviewer, I know.

Date: 2010-03-25 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Any review is a good review and I'm just happy you enjoyed it.

Geoffrey/Jeff is one of my favourite things about this fic. I wasn't going to put him in at first, then he just sort of appeared.

^_^ Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Date: 2010-03-21 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mimi-la-fee.livejournal.com
Wow have just read every single chapter and your verse is incredible.

I would love to have some more though, something on the reconstruction of the world

Date: 2010-03-25 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'm really glad you liked it.

I've got a million other things to write at the moment, (I have compulsive-fic-challenge-sign-up-itis... or something) but if I get any inspiration for a sequel, then you might get some. After all, We still have to find out what happened to the people Gwen saw herded away... and Merlin's Mum (and is there an Uther? Idek!)

So yeah, there might be a sequel, but it could be a while in coming.

Date: 2010-03-21 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] serendu.livejournal.com
Woah. Epic.

Definitely worth staying up late to read it all!

Date: 2010-03-25 12:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Hope you didn't lose too much sleep. ^_^

Thanks for reviewing. Good to know how much you liked it.

Date: 2010-03-21 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daniramble.livejournal.com
Oh my god this was amazing!

Date: 2010-03-25 12:55 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-03-22 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lcacbc.livejournal.com
OMG this was epic! The fear, and the panic, and Arthur being all kingly was described so well - I really felt for them. I only wish we'd seen the Arthur/Merlin reuniting sexitimes XDD

And you've sort of made me too terrified to go on the tube again. The way you wrote about a destroyed London made me shiver - I could really picture it!

AMAZING!

Date: 2010-03-25 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Sadly my muse is bad at teh sex. *sigh*

I'm glad that the atmosphere came across so well. It's one of the major things with apocafic. You can't lose the atmosphere. ^_^ Thanks for the lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Date: 2010-03-22 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofiaottoman.livejournal.com
This was a really brilliant read :)

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Date: 2010-03-25 12:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-03-22 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nyxelestia.livejournal.com
Awesome epic. I loved the way you described the reality of the situation with the bodies in the street and stuff. Arthur still being noble despite being an office mink was great, and the way they all took a while to realize what their names were adding up to was excellent. Merlin and Arthur remembering at different times was well done, especially in connecting to their past lives. The way you hinted at the events of their past lives without directly stating it was awesome, and I loved how apprehensive and confident at the same time Merlin was. Their kiss on the London Eye was awesome, and all the zombies were much fun. The identity of the enemy never being clear was great, and the dragons were awesome. Also, gotta love Jeff - I admit, he was the one that confused me most, and I didn't realize it was Geoffrey until the last chapter (before the epilogue).

Overall, awesome fic!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thanks. I didn't want to gloss over the death and destruction. I mean, it is the apocalypse after all. (and that is the reasoning behind the R rating...)

The kiss on the London Eye was actually the scene the entire plot was constructed around *blush*. I came up with that and then I tried to find a way to make it not cheesy. I like to think I managed.

Glad to hear that Jeff was as ambiguous as I planned. (I was having a little fun with him, I didn't want it to be too obvious until the epilogue, so I'm actually pleased it took you that long. ^_^)

Thanks again.

Date: 2010-03-22 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreaming-athena.livejournal.com
That was amazing! It was spellbinding, and funny at parts, and sad at (many more) parts and it felt real, which is quite amazing considering the situation.

Date: 2010-03-25 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. Realism is a real compliment, as you said, considering the situation. I'm glad I could make it vivid enough. ^_^ Glad you liked it.

Date: 2010-03-22 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ofsighs.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness, this fic took my breath away. I'm supposed to be studying for finals, but then I saw this and started reading it a couple of hours ago, and just-- wow. Absolutely amazing fic, I really felt the emotions of the characters, and as I was reading I kept thinking so this is what it feels to be going through an apocalypse, I can't breathe-- .

I might fail my finals tomorrow but reading this epic is worth it. Brilliant.

Date: 2010-03-25 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
I hope your finals went well, despite my fic conspiring to ruin them for you.

Thank you for such a lovely comment, and I'm glad the emotions and the atmosphere came through for you. It's good to know that you enjoyed it so much.

Thanks again (and good luck)

Date: 2010-03-22 08:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fuzzytale.livejournal.com
That was really wonderful. I do hope you're going to continue it to the rebuilding of the world, but either way thanks so much for sharing.

Date: 2010-03-25 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thanks.

I know I left a lot of questions, and if I get inspiration for answering them I'll definitely think about a sequel, but at the moment I'm tied down with about a hundred different things to write (I don't think my schedule's free until September or something)

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for commenting.

Date: 2010-03-22 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eruminator.livejournal.com
Dude. I just finished this. It was everything I could have hoped for... and more. Really really excellent job. Positively brilliant!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thank you for such a nice comment. I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much.

Date: 2010-03-22 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zephre.livejournal.com
this was a great read - the perfect entertainment for long hours of waiting at the airport! :)
fun adventure and bonus zombie mayhem! yay!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
You can thank my beta for the zombies. She insisted that it couldn't be a proper apocalypse without zombies - I needed something sutiably gruesome for the London Eye scene and so...

I'm glad I kept you entertained. Thanks for reviewing. ^_^

Date: 2010-03-22 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veejean45.livejournal.com
WOW!!! I started reading this on my lunch hour and couldn't tear myself away (stupid work can wait...). Please please please let there be a sequel!!!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Lol. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you liked it so much.

When I've finished the million and one things I'm doing at the moment and if I get the ideas, then there might be a sequel, but I'm afraid I can't make any promises.

Thanks again for the review. ^_^ Hope I didn't get you into any trouble at work.

Date: 2010-03-22 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nightingale-r3.livejournal.com
That was just so wonderful :)

Date: 2010-03-25 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2010-03-22 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lusimeles.livejournal.com
this was just so well-plotted and well-executed and as everybody has pointed out so far, epic. i've read it through once but i'm definitely going to read it through again, because there's just so much going on and i love the build-up of the merlin/arthur dynamic as well as mad-but-not-really morgana. ALSO, JEFF!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
The word epic just makes me so happy. Thanks ^_^

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, Thanks again.

Date: 2010-03-23 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravyn-09.livejournal.com
Absolute love!

I know all good stories have an ending, but honestly, if your fic had 30 more chapters, I would have read it all in one night. And still get up the next morning to go to work. That's how much I adore your writing. I'm willing to sacrifice my sleep just to read it. That there is the truest love from me you will ever get. ;)

Excellent job. I enjoyed ever word!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thanks ^_^.

I'm so glad you liked it that much. Though I hope you didn't lose too much sleep. (Or at least not as much as I did writing and editing it).

Thanks again.

Date: 2010-03-23 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonbetween.livejournal.com
This was just beyond amazing! I don't even have the words to tell you how much I loved it. I'd love to see more to this story but at the same time I'm so very happy with and moved by this ending that I almost think more would strip it of it's power.

Date: 2010-03-25 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thank you for taking the time to comment, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much. I was never quite sure about the ending when I was writing it, so I'm glad that it worked well.

Thanks again.

Date: 2010-03-23 06:04 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookfaye.livejournal.com
This is so epic and wonderful, suspenseful and action-packed, and I wholly enjoyed reading this so, so much. Lovely!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Thank you! *bounces* I'm so grateful that the word 'epic' is being bounced around, it's what I was trying for. Thanks again. Glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2010-03-23 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jumperkid.livejournal.com
This story was exciting! I enjoyed seeing how Arthur and Co. handled the situation. And I really loved the inclusion of Jeff!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Jeff was a late addition to the casting, he sort of popped up and I thought 'huh, that might be cool' then I started writing him and he clicked. I'm glad that other people liked him too.

Thanks for commenting.

Date: 2010-03-23 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chrisvel.livejournal.com
Wow, this is great! I found myself thinking "Shaun of the dead" meets "Merlin", and then came the zombies ... ha, I love that film and I love your great story.
Took me a while to get Jeff, great addition and wonderful epilogue from his POV. I would so love to read more in this verse ... a rebuild of the world, some more about Merlin and now finally Arthur remembering, simply more of this.
The flashes of memories throughout the story, the hints and feeling of fate made this so fascinating to read, I love Morgana as the one to bring them all together. Really an epic and for me instant classic read, thank you for writing and sharing this.

Date: 2010-03-25 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
I love that film too! Zombie humour ftw!

If I ever get the rest of my fic writing obligations out of the way (and I have a lot of them, it's sort of an addiction) then I might write a sequel if I can find the write plot and idea for it. I know I left a lot of unanswered questions, but I don't want to write any more unless I'm absolutely certain that it's right.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to review. ^_^

Date: 2010-03-24 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bibliofilen.livejournal.com
Brilliant and totally captivating. You've kept me up way past my bedtime!

Date: 2010-03-25 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mariana-oconnor.livejournal.com
Hope you didn't lose too much sleep.

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2010-03-25 07:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] netgirl-y2k.livejournal.com
Wow. I just, this is unspeakably brilliant!

Some things in particular I love

-WILL. You brought back Will, and lo, he was brilliant!
-Gwen working for a sex chat line, and yet still being so in character and basically Gwen-ish. Her phonecall with Will after the earthquake was just charming.
-Morgana as the Lady of the Lake. I love her going around randomly hugging people she remembers, and I absolutely adore that you found a way to include her and keep her so in character without ignoring that she probably isn't going to have the easiest relationship with Merlin & Arthur in Camelot.
-Knights! Gawain being in a wheelchair, being a human rights lawyer and kick-ass with a shotgun was just utter genius.
-Dragons! Merlin insisting on helping the hurt one, and the Dragons siding with Arthur at the end.
-Too many great lines to count.

And probably about twelve other things that I'll remember as soon as I've hit post. ♥

Date: 2010-03-25 10:07 pm (UTC)
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As other people have already said - this was epic! The description of all the devastation seen from the London Eye felt as if there was a camera panning across the scene.

I loved Gawain being all competent and fighting with words as well as he fought with a shotgun. Your very snooty Percival made me smile as well.

Morgana and Merlin's TV show history was very well handled and I liked the fact that Merlin and Arthur remembered who they were at different times but the banter was still there. Oh, and the typical Merlin-ness in saving a wounding dragon and playing dress up with the Crown Jewels and both of those things turning out to be important.

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