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definewisdom ([personal profile] definewisdom) wrote2009-10-19 01:44 pm

Fic: Merlin/Firefly; Avalon ; R; Reel Merlin (Round 2) MASTER POST

Title:Avalon
Author:[livejournal.com profile] mariana_oconnor
Movie Prompt: Serenity
Pairing: None as the focus, but Gwen/Lancelot, pre-slash Merlin/Arthur
Rating: R for language and adult themes.
Word Count: ~43500
Spoilers/Warnings: Violence, Character death (major & minor), abuse of Old English
Author's Notes: For those of you who know Serenity and Firefly, you will recognise that several aspects of the television series, not just the film have made their way into this fic. You’ll probably spot all of them. I’ve tried to splice them together as well as I can.

For the purposes of narrative flow and to cut down on word count and lengthy excerpts in which nothing much happens, the Pendragons do not spend as long on board Avalon as the Tams spend on Serenity. This makes the interpersonal relationships evolve a lot faster than I would have liked, but some things are just necessary.

This follows the major plot of the original film quite closely, although I’ve changed things on many significant points. I’m not telling you whether those include any of the deaths (no, not even going to tell you about that one).

I cut the Inara role out of this fic because the only Merlin character I could think of who was remotely Companion like was Sophia, and she’s more of a Saffron character. (God, I want to write that fic now!)

In the spirit of the original, the characters swear and sometimes comment in a second language. As I don’t know Mandarin, I didn’t use that. I did, in true Merlin style, do them all in Old English, which I also haven’t learnt. I apologise for any grammatical or vocabulary errors, all of it comes from www.oldenglishtranstator.co.uk. All translations are in the post-fic notes along with a timeline, detailing the major events in the history of the fic, and extended character notes. Feel free to ask questions or point out plot holes. In fact I encourage you to do so.

I’ve tried to include small nods to Serenity and Firefly, and also Merlin, along the way. Some original dialogue from both fandoms is included, some things are just in built.

I hope I’ve managed to do both sides of this justice, though I can’t imagine I have. Please enjoy, and be kind. I’m not Joss Whedon.

Acknowledgements: So many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] wrennette again for being an awesome beta. I really do abuse the privilege terribly. Though I've been tweaking things right up to this morning. ^_^;; Also thanks to [livejournal.com profile] krazykipper and [livejournal.com profile] merelyn for being kind enough to let me rearrange my posting day... twice. ^_^ And to my f-list who didn't tell me to shut up. ^_^


Summary:Arthur Pendragon just wanted to keep his sister safe, he didn't really think about anything else. But now he's being hunted by the Alliance. Captain William Moore and the crew of his ship, Avalon, have no idea what they're in store for when they pick up two passengers at Camelot space-port.

part 1|part 2|part 3|part 4|part 5|part 6

alternate ending

My poor attempt at banner making

Translation|other notes|Time Line

[identity profile] kathkin.livejournal.com 2009-10-19 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
K so I just wanted to say that you are AWESOME. : D This is one of my favorite films.
Problem is I have to go out in an hour or so and I don't think I have time to read it. BUT SOON.

[identity profile] submissionadict.livejournal.com 2009-10-19 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
okay you don't know how much appreciation you're getting from me just by WRITING THIS. seriously. just.. the mere fact that you wrote it is awesome.

and Merlin speaking in old english.
oh my life.

here. heres my firstborn *hands over to you*



exesandohesxo
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[personal profile] ashoakandthorn 2009-10-19 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I am so happy about this. I can't express it in words.

You can't stop the signal.

[identity profile] ras-elased.livejournal.com 2009-10-19 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
ACK WHY MUST I HAVE MAJOR HOMEWORK ASSIGNS AND A MIDTERM THIS WEEK? WHYYYYEEEEEE???? D:

WILL TOTALLY READ THIS SOMETIME AFTER THURSDAY!!!

[identity profile] goth-prostitute.livejournal.com 2009-10-20 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
T____________________T no Inara!???...

oh well... still looking forward to reading... *rubs hands gleefully*

[identity profile] hime2emeh.livejournal.com 2009-10-25 11:25 am (UTC)(link)
ooh ... that was FANTASTIC! *clap*

thank you for the long and enjoyable read :D

also, the notes and translations are extremely helpful. thank you for providing it. this fic certainly shows how much time and consideration you've put onto it :) congrats on completing! and you have such a fine works to shows it for too \o/ go you!!!
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[identity profile] midasu.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 06:41 am (UTC)(link)
This story is very, very awesome. I can tell you really thought everything and made a fusion that was true to Firefly and Merlin. Amazing job!!

[identity profile] natanilik.livejournal.com 2011-05-10 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
... I am speechless.

You did both Merlin and Serenity such justice with this FF it filled me with happy feelings while reading XD Seriously, the way you managed to include the Merlin characters (IC!!) into the movie story felt natural and OMG the scene were Will made Merlin stick Hunith's body to the ship nearly made me cry.

Though you said that the relationship between the crew and the Pendragon siblings seemed rushed for me it felt natural. In fact you could have rushed Merlin's and Arthur's relationship a bit more, I mean, Simon and Kylee at least got to kiss!damn, sometimes I'm such a shipper :D

But well, this was amazing and the work and detail that into it just boogles my mind (alone the coding for the translation list must have taken ages) so thanks for writing!