This is bloody amazing! I think someone had commented on the prologue with something like 'and this is just the prologue!!' and that was EXACTLY what my reaction was!!! This is just super amazing, I cant believe its on the the first chapter! Im off to read the rest, but I just wanted to gush here, so you know how awesome I think this is. I cant wait for Arthur and Merlin to meet properly!

Btw you write a BRILLIANT Will .. you really hit the spot with his humour. Just brilliant! xx