Again, sharp dialogue and rich detail make for a vivid, entertaining read. Will's anger seems less about worry for Merlin than jealousy over his attachment to Arthur. His goading at Christmas dinner seemed unwarranted. Merlin has a right to bitch about his job, Will really doesn't.
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Date: 2010-04-13 11:58 pm (UTC)Sophia! *cue ominous music*