woah. *blink* ... *shivers* this was incredibly intense. but what i thought was brilliant - apart from the vivid and not-so-obvious descriptions, particularly of the colours ("shards of blue in a glorious world of gold") and their symbolism - was the way you managed to convey Morgana's total lack of sympathy, or grief, or... anything. She took her spoils of war, and surveyed calmly and proudly what she had done.
And as I read it again, the image of a bloodstained, heartbroken Arthur brought me to tears. God, I hope we never see this on the show or I will scream. And cry.
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*shivers*
this was incredibly intense. but what i thought was brilliant - apart from the vivid and not-so-obvious descriptions, particularly of the colours ("shards of blue in a glorious world of gold") and their symbolism - was the way you managed to convey Morgana's total lack of sympathy, or grief, or... anything. She took her spoils of war, and surveyed calmly and proudly what she had done.
And as I read it again, the image of a bloodstained, heartbroken Arthur brought me to tears. God, I hope we never see this on the show or I will scream. And cry.